How we rectified the problems we received on our feedback

-We cut some of the clips down using final cut pro again, to alter the pace of the title sequence, we wanted it to be quicker and not bore the audience. 

-We faded out the music at the end of the clip like some of the feedback suggested. This gave the title sequence a more professional feel to it, like it would appear in a real film.

These were the main two issues that were raised, the pace being the main problem. We attempted to revise these issues to make the title sequence look more professional and to make it appeal to our audience more.