Thursday 17 January 2013

Media Feedback and changes I made

This is my media blog feedback from Ms Whittaker.
Things that I needed to improve and how I changed them:
-No pictures in text to break it up.  To improve, I added relevant images into my text.
-Spelling and Grammer in places is wrong. I went through my blog checking and rectifying my spelling and grammer as best as I could.
-Too many short paragraphs/sentences. I added more into my paragraphs and then condensed some of them together to make larger paragraphs.
-Too many unnecessary labels. I removed any unnecessary labels.
-Move some of my posts around to be in the correct order




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